When Someone Leaves Comments

short poem with limmited words................but with the most painful emotion one vcan ever face, ...... a very deep thought and emotional bond......... 10 on 10 di............

hmmm this is short and impactful work, , , , when someone goes away, , , he/she carry all ur happiness which u shared with him/her, , true///

This is a strong write ma'am! When you see death before death in the form of pain over loss, death itself disgusts!

short but steeped in torment of loss and privation attendant with it .............just like death before death. powerful metaphor liked

very true.liked it.short and to the point.

death, an elusive mist that leaves a hollow shard of truth in its wake. a very good write. please read some of mine.

Thankyou very much..! ! glad you liked it and can relate to it.

I really appreciate you all for reading it.. our own death leads us to peace but that of someone dear kills us and we have to live with it.. thankyou all..! !

short and full of emotion the pain of death is hard to bear.

Short and sweet poem... Good write.