Tuesday, April 28, 2009

When Snow Melts Comments

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When the hot winds blow and trees beep,
The snow clad peaks melt as if they weep,
The icy water trickles, falls gushing down,
From the rocks crimson, grey and brown,
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Muhammad Shanazar
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Saadat Tahir 28 April 2009

Shanazar aakum thats are very nice poem very well written...nice rhyme cheers

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 28 April 2009

truly spectacular..u have captured the essence and wonder that is snow..marvelous work

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