Thursday, November 5, 2020

When Smile Became The Goal, I Know Not... Comments

Rating: 4.6

I happened to meet a person
Can't label him as joker insane
But he never misses to trouble again
And then with long face keep revolving again.
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Varsha M
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Anjandev Roy 14 June 2021

Outstanding write.....wonderful to read...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 December 2020

An insightful piece of poetry! My great pleasure revisiting this marvelous poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 November 2020

No matter what occurs in life! ! ! ! Always be very joyful! ! ! Able to live another day. ☘😄🤗 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rajnish Manga 08 November 2020

Pranks are born like budding flowers.. Joker all with his mere nonsense haul.... //.... Very well articulated. The poem underlines the need of humour in life and to celebrate life with heartful of smiles. Lovely poem and an equally charming smiley.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 07 November 2020

Enjoying every moment like a holy soul What else we on earth can really dream? Varsha can we move like that? May not be. Coz we are mad

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 November 2020

A beautifully inked poem. Truly fascinating. 5 stars*****

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 November 2020

A great work! Appreciated.....All stars

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 November 2020

Some people have that innate talent to make people smile with their jokes and one of a kind behavior like clowns. However, not all people, can grasp their demeanor and to some are irritating. An astute observation on people's behavior and character. A well crafted and expressed poem.

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Kostas Lagos 05 November 2020

GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD! Pranksters rule!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 November 2020

a really very humoristic poetry. hahaahha o lalalala can be sung like songa butterr lalalaalas saya below walllaaaa ooooo lalalalaaaaaa lllaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Khairul Ahsan 05 November 2020

You've quite been able to deliver humour, Varsha. I've been truly amused. The last stanza is particularly good and interesting.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 05 November 2020

I am smiling. Nay i am giggling. Nice light poem. You made my day

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 November 2020

An amazing poem! Liked it......All stars

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