Sunday, March 21, 2021

When Silence Is The Editor Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your silence stings my solitude
Editing my thoughts and words
Into the language of barren trees
On each page I flip, I see your hand erasing
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Nosheen Irfan
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Sandra Feldman 20 February 2023

Disappointment, so deeply and explicitly felt. Reaches out bravely in all its hurting vent. Brave poem.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 February 2023

Nosheen loved the poem all the way through, especially the first two lines

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Anjandev Roy 20 February 2023

Very profound.........thanks for sharing.....

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M Asim Nehal 22 March 2021

It turned out to be the loudest voice from the soul. The silence can never be so powerful. I quote my fav lines: I dump my love story into the trash bin I cannot be the writer of my destiny.100*****

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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