When She Went Away.... Comments
Oh! From my pathetic life she went away
Her feet never treaded back on the bleak road
Heading towards my restless heart's abode
Everything changed, everything remained the same
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a perfect rhymes of parting embraced with extraordinary images of nature surrounds, unseemingly imaginative mono silemces giving the final strokes like a renowned painter to ease the uncomfortable, ..and thank god finally culminating to a ' hand shake' with the presense! so beaitiful..., a certain 10+++...++++! ! thank you for sharing..and so much!
Oh my God! Thank you so very much sir.....it means a lot to me if poets like you appreciate me for growing each day in my work.....
On the bleak road. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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7/30/2025 12:19:35 PM # 1.0.0
like a river, Life to 'recklessly flow'...a fine verse with such philosophical depth and truth! psense can never step back to past, nor past can know where future stands.... another fact of time that can not be challenged! .... immacculately presented craft of work, thanks for sharing! I bow!
Heaps and heaps of thanks......that's all I can say