Friday, July 28, 2006

When She Was Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the most sunniest day of the year,
On the most brightest day of the month,
On the most hottest day of the week,
A little girl was in the middle of the park.
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Andrea Szyhowski
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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 25 September 2022

The series of double superlatives in the first and last stanzas, I tend to believe that they are there deliberately. But the superfluous plural in the last line…..

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