Wednesday, May 22, 2013

When She Was In Comments

Rating: 5.0

Most beaches shine
With sands silver and golden,
But only when the sun smiles.
Our beach always beam,
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Tajudeen Shah
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Valsa George 05 June 2013

A hair raising description of the rage of Nature and of the sea in all its bewildering intensity! Reading this is an experience as I am in the midst of a Tsunami- A diaster which has shattered the lives of thosands and plunged them to perpetual gloom! Amid the roar of the the tempest and the rising waves, the cry of the hapless victims might have left no echo. Silence like waves must have closed over them and now their bones lie whitening among the caverns of the deep! A terrific write! ! In this context I invite you to read my poem- A Calm before the Storm!

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Kavya . 22 May 2013

a nice poem dedicated to the ones who suffered in tsunami.

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