Thursday, July 10, 2008

When She Speaks Comments

Rating: 4.9

Deceived by her blithe smile
Deeming that she was fine
Blinded by own happiness
Anguished by selfishness
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Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness
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Greenwolfe 1962 27 August 2008

This writing is somewhat vague, so I am not quite sure I understand its meaning. If I am wrong, then the worst thing that has happened is that I have given it a 9 instead of a 7. I can live with that a lot easier than the other way around. GW62

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Frank Cannon 23 July 2008

A cracking good piece joan. well done.

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Colin Jeffery 19 July 2008

A poem by a poet of merit. Billiant.

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Triste Mujer 11 July 2008

A wonderful poem. The woman in your poem was suffocated. He let her go eventhough it is so painful for him.

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