Tuesday, May 26, 2009

**when She Passed Away Comments

Rating: 2.7

For the smiles had turned
Tears in crimson color
The coriander vase had been broken
In smooth passage after much wailing
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Ejaz Khan 26 May 2009

A beautiful poem that mixes the tragedies of the individual with that of a nation, where the preperations are made for long drawn war and its miseries. Well penned. 10+++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

'I had seen immense beauty In death she looked angel' Touchy and nice 10+

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