Friday, November 6, 2009

When She Cries Comments

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When she cries i truely feel it deep in my skin
She cries with such passion from deep within
I try to ignore it but i cannot win
The look in her eyes that fill me with sin
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Daniel Mason
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Daniel Mason 12 May 2010

thanks a whole lot i truly belive dat is true

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awww! ! ! ! ! ! ! Daniel this poem is so true. Love is hard to find, that i know but when you find it and it is true it can hold on throught every thing. No ones relationship is perfect and couples normaly fight, thats just healthy. But wiht out a fight how will you ever know where your love and relationship stands. I am not saying fight every day just so u can make up im say love and love always. Soem times it is hard to let go of love once you have it in your grasp but the good thing about this world is that everyone will love you no matter what..Even if some one is't there to hold on to you every day your friends and family will love you the same. The way you are and your personality is what makes them love you...So find true love and not just a speed bump in the road and trust me when you find it spraks will be glowing

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Kenya Mallett 10 November 2009

You are right there is nothing more important than true love if thatas really what you feel in your heart. I know that it hurts to be and get hurt but you know that the girls come and they go. I told you that life is filled with to much excitment. You need no to commit yourself to anyone till you know that your life indepemdently is how its supposed to be. Im not saying dont care for her im just saying dont hold on to something you dont have a definite grasp of. LOVE YOU MUCH BRO! And if you see this nickey try to get in touch with me cuz i would really like to give you a lil bit of advice because i feel like i know where the both of you stand in yall unstable relationship...............

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Nickey Mason 06 November 2009

tears

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Nyl Relov 06 November 2009

Really sad... Keep it up.

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Daniel Mason

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