When Shall The World Comments

Perfection!

Beautiful and well structured question to the world. It is an abode of hope for unity. Thank you ma.

Such beautiful thoughts, and so well expressed.

A wonderful wishful poem, of a world too far gone to be this - and yet we still hope as the verses speak forth. A thought-provoking write.

Val, Revelations tells us that when all religions are as one (we all get along) the end of the world is here. It is a good poem though, I for one wish it could be true. maybe if only to see if the bible was correct on this one Nice write, good rhythm

When hearts are filled with loving verse to extinguish greed, hate and envies curse. Thank you for this inspiring poem. We will progress, there is no way back.

So beautiful message you delivered thru this poem. A picture of Utopia.

Addresses vital issues. Such longing paints a perfect picture of something that we soooo thirst for. 10

Valerie, you are brilliant like a shutting star every word in your beautiful expression! Beautiful! ! Thank you.

when? .... right now would be wonderful! beautiful poetry.

Mellifluous stuctural flow...Positive voice filled with the verve of Hope...Stellar quilling ms. V.....~FjR~

A very beautiful poem.

Only when everyone reads and lives your poem. Perfectly cadenced with a strong unifying, uplifting message

So beautiful Valerie.

questions that need an answer. Indeed beautiful poetry.

A real heartfelt caring poem Val, When shall the world, All strife and warfare so to end, If only-