Thursday, April 13, 2017

When Rivers Sing Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wonder if you think of me
for like a ghost I hear your voice
a song that will not let me be
still whispers like a fatal choice
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 13 April 2017

Another superb write that takes the readers' breath away. Divine. Our dreams carry us on in the ways where love and ache mingle. Lovely flow to your verse. Great rhythm. I can hear the rivers sing. A huge 10.

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Barry Middleton 13 April 2017

Thank you so much Nosheen for the high praise. I'm just glad you liked it.

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