Friday, February 3, 2017

When Rivers Run Cold Comments

Rating: 5.0

When rivers run cold, it makes you wonder if they were ever warm
Why we ever went skinny-dipping, swam naked in a thunderstorm
When fires turn to ashes, it makes you wonder did they ever burn.
Why was the air sulphur every other silent nocturne?
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Chinedu Dike 10 March 2017

A well drafted and elegantly composed piece of poetry embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Focussed and factual. Thanks for sharing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 March 2017

A superb life song reflecting intricacies in human perceptions and their transformations. Heartiest congrats on the Poem of the Day.

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Amar Agarwala 10 March 2017

Wonderful poetry... great message!

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 March 2017

When fires turn to ashes! Thanks for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 March 2017

It is a very beautiful poem with a smooth flow and a great message. Life is full of events that are ugly and good. But to face them with a cool mind that makes the life beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Congrats.

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 March 2017

Beautiful write. When we turn back our pages we feel the same way. Bunch of memories keeps changing, for some questions go without an answer. Loved reading it. Congrats! ! !

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Clarence Prince 10 March 2017

Great, and useful are our rivers, whether cold or warm, we still benefit by them. Thank for sharing, all the best to you!

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Tom Allport 10 March 2017

a very uplifting poem saying never give up and never give in? beauty is always within! well written.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 March 2017

Beautifier..... thanks for sharing.......

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Bharati Nayak 10 March 2017

The healings in your heart and soul, don't let them rivers run cold or dry There are fires eternal simple as a simple firefly no one else can see or classify When words turn ugly hold out an olive branch and remember it isn't you It isn't you, it isn't you, and remembers you can't be ever, subdued- - - - - - There are ups and downs, love and hate as part of our life's journey.In the face of adversity we should not let our zeal die. An amazing write- - - Thanks for sharing.

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