The cloud at the horizon
Hung dark; an over laden
Piece of sponge precariously
Holding the water on earth
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An excellent poem to indicate how the pavement hawkers abhor rain from their point of view!
Rain has different effect on different people, not always poetic. You say it well sympathetically in a terse copmosition.
it's the grim side of the monsoon, the romantic mood of all seasons!
Welcome things are unwelcome sometimes. Nicely put here.
Rain spells pain for so many, but that's true for all sweet things. A different view and an astounding poem laced with irony.
nice poem mam i like it very much