Tuesday, June 25, 2013

When Rain Is Unwelcome Comments

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The cloud at the horizon
Hung dark; an over laden
Piece of sponge precariously
Holding the water on earth
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indira babbellapati
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Anamika Jalan 30 June 2013

nice poem mam i like it very much

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Chandra Thiagarajan 29 June 2013

An excellent poem to indicate how the pavement hawkers abhor rain from their point of view!

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Yasmin Khan 29 June 2013

Rain has different effect on different people, not always poetic. You say it well sympathetically in a terse copmosition.

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Shahzia Batool 27 June 2013

it's the grim side of the monsoon, the romantic mood of all seasons!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 June 2013

Welcome things are unwelcome sometimes. Nicely put here.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 June 2013

Rain spells pain for so many, but that's true for all sweet things. A different view and an astounding poem laced with irony.

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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