Tuesday, October 30, 2018

When Played The Music. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Through the swinging branches and whistling reeds
A song of heart floated in breeze.
When a bird heard it,
She carried the music on her wings and
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Bharati Nayak
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Bri Edwards 18 February 2023

******* NOTE WELL: Bharati has hastily reminded me that it was NOT Dr. Antony Theodore who died recently. It was another PH friend of hers, Daniel Brick! ! ! ! RIP!

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Bri Edwards 18 February 2023

Their book is entitled In the Realms of Love & Divinity, which was sent to me as a gift by Bharati. Thanks, Bharati. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 18 February 2023

Another 5-star poem. And this and many more from Bharati are included in a book of poems by Bharati and the late PH member, Dr. Antony Theodore.

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Bri Edwards 18 February 2023

'With the scattering stars, Milky ways and galaxies.' Well, the 'Milky Way' IS a 'gallaxy' AND includes 'stars', including Earth's own 'Sun'. bri ;) I've rarely noticed it in the sky. It's awesome.

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Bri Edwards 18 February 2023

stanza 2: I'll assume PH is responsible for 'theflowers', though, IF PH IS responsible, it's been a long time since PH used to do such a thing. Well poem is from 4 years ago. bri

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Bri Edwards 18 February 2023

some favorite lines: 'He bore the tune in his colorful wings and Darted through the garden' AND: 'She mixed the tune in her gurgling ripples. As the whole universe danced in unison' I had to look closely to not read as 'nipples'! ! ! : )

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 January 2019

When the river heard it! ! 😀🌍🧚‍♀️ Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 21 January 2019

Thank you Edward Kofi Louis for beautiful comment.

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Naila Rais 02 November 2018

Nature sing the pleasant music....... A charming to heart.... 10 +++++++ Naila

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Bharati Nayak 02 November 2018

Thank you Naila Rais for liking my poem Hope you read my other poems and give your valuable opinion.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 November 2018

A beautiful poem with stunning expression. Song and music of nature has been touchingly weaved. Color on butterfly and flowers is astutely painted. A brilliant poem shared amazingly.10

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Bharati Nayak 02 November 2018

I am very much grateful to you for kindly reading my poems and giving encoraging feedback.

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Susan Williams 01 November 2018

This is superb! ! ! ! ! ! The verses drift beautifully on the wings of your well-chosen words.I am placing this on my fav list and showering thousands of starry-eyed 10; s! ! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Bharati Nayak 01 November 2018

A very joyous voice is concealed in your comment.As if you are shouting from America- - I love it'I love it.Thank you so much for your reading, commenting and those starry-eyed 10, s.

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Abhipsa Panda 01 November 2018

Music is a sign of peace, love and unity...well penned..10

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Bharati Nayak 01 November 2018

Thank you Abhipsa Panda for your beautiful comment.

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Anil Kumar Panda 30 October 2018

Music always brings peace and love to the mind and heart. Whether birds, animals, streams or trees all swing in ecstasy hearing music. A nicely penned poem with a mystic flow in it. Me feel the music in the lines too. Thanks.10++++++++++++

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Bharati Nayak 31 October 2018

Thank you Anil Kumar Panda for your lovely comment.Much appreciated.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 October 2018

what beauty lies in hidden songs we hear all the while such as this one yours ma'am BEFORE I lose you o poet too I would appreciate a special favour comment on my latest poem Why They Hurt before I lose poetic friendship with you. I'd hate to lose my friend in poet you So Hence I will not comment if it helps you

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Bharati Nayak 31 October 2018

Thank you Poet Poet for kindly reading my poems and giving encouraging comments.

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M Asim Nehal 30 October 2018

The positive effect of the the music on each creature is differently shown, although they all heard the same music but reacted in their own joyous moments. Masterpiece.10+

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Bharati Nayak 30 October 2018

Thank you Mohammed Asim Nehalji for kindly reading my poem and giving your beautiful comment.

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