Tuesday, March 10, 2015

When People Die Comments

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How people actually feel when they die? ?
Where do they go? what do they do?
I want to know
but how?
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bakuli bhakali
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Unnikrishnan E S 05 April 2017

Hi Bakuli, Very poignant poem. Trying to capture the answer to a question, no living being is able to answer, yet everybody would be eager to find out.

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Howard Savage 04 January 2016

That a Profound question that only the dead has experienced, don't look forward to that feeling. Strong writing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 December 2015

Dearth is part of us. As we journey in earth! Nice work.

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Ashek Sarker 08 December 2015

i wonder how such a beautiful poetess can deal with such stark realities of life as death so adroitly.it made me ponder over our constant companion who is intently watching our every step, ready to prey upon us at the slightest opportunity.enjoyed this poem.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 03 December 2015

If you want to die a thousand's death then live for others Verily, in this is the message......10

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Souren Mondal 18 November 2015

Well, we should aspire to live such a life that we can die with peace.. Thanks for sharing Bakuli...

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Bakuli Bhakali 19 November 2015

that's true Souren! but to die with peace we must promote peace! thanks for reading and commenting...

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A A Umar Udubo 16 November 2015

Fascinating! And strange truth seems to be gushing out from the tip of your pen. Still I got inspired. Bakuli, may I thank you for this wonderful piece.

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Bakuli Bhakali 17 November 2015

the pleasure is mine! and... i'm glad, my poem could inspire you.

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Benjamin Icon Ede 14 November 2015

Been reading your poem and must confess there isn't any bad ink emitting from you pen. With such beautiful colors you paint your message-even death with no shadow of fear lurking around it!

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Bakuli Bhakali 15 November 2015

That's very encouraging! Thanks Ede! !

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Phil Soar 06 November 2015

If you think too hard about it, it can literally 'scare you to death'. Nice poem

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Bakuli Bhakali 06 November 2015

thank u...

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Lyn Paul 10 March 2015

Yes we most certainly all do have to die. You have expressed death in a cheerful way. Well done for this as we must not be afraid.

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Bakuli Bhakali 12 March 2015

Thank you so much! Your comment mean a lot to me..

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