How people actually feel when they die? ?
Where do they go? what do they do?
I want to know
but how?
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That a Profound question that only the dead has experienced, don't look forward to that feeling. Strong writing.
Dearth is part of us. As we journey in earth! Nice work.
i wonder how such a beautiful poetess can deal with such stark realities of life as death so adroitly.it made me ponder over our constant companion who is intently watching our every step, ready to prey upon us at the slightest opportunity.enjoyed this poem.
If you want to die a thousand's death then live for others Verily, in this is the message......10
Well, we should aspire to live such a life that we can die with peace.. Thanks for sharing Bakuli...
that's true Souren! but to die with peace we must promote peace! thanks for reading and commenting...
Fascinating! And strange truth seems to be gushing out from the tip of your pen. Still I got inspired. Bakuli, may I thank you for this wonderful piece.
the pleasure is mine! and... i'm glad, my poem could inspire you.
Been reading your poem and must confess there isn't any bad ink emitting from you pen. With such beautiful colors you paint your message-even death with no shadow of fear lurking around it!
If you think too hard about it, it can literally 'scare you to death'. Nice poem
Yes we most certainly all do have to die. You have expressed death in a cheerful way. Well done for this as we must not be afraid.
Hi Bakuli, Very poignant poem. Trying to capture the answer to a question, no living being is able to answer, yet everybody would be eager to find out.