When Our Ways Parted……. Comments

This is sad and painful. Poets write from whatever they see happening around them, not necessarily with them. I hope your poem is not autobiographic. I have liked your poem, and the honesty with which you have depicted the once sweet relationship turning sour and bitter. The last two lines are truly poetic expression of the blood stained feelings, very successfully they sum up the text. The title is eye catching. I have rated your poem 10/10. My best wishes...