Saturday, June 13, 2009

When Our Picnic's Over Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dumb innocent girl expressed her inner feelings to the blind companion.
I watch and realized what she wants to tell;
' Hey! I 'll give you a warm kiss if you sing me a sad song.'
Instead of him I muttered my favorite nursery rhyme.
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Sandra Fowler 13 June 2009

You write with a compassionate pen. I love the little firefly song. I believe I will take it with me. Thank you, Nimal. Fond regards, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 13 June 2009

Your firefly seems to have landed on the hearts of your dumb girl and her blind companion. Innate and intuitive sensitivity is displayed in many of your poems, Nimal. This one is particularly poignant. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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