Monday, September 14, 2009

When Our Love Is War Comments

Rating: 3.5

Tonight, standing too close to the stars,
You feel the heat in the darkness,
Flames from fire.
I took you to the stars.
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 12 October 2009

A really provocative piece and a compelling read. Great work

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Juniper March 07 October 2009

I really loved this poem, I think we have all been here and this captures the feeling

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Mubeen Sadhika 16 September 2009

Nice expression. Beautifully written. deserves 10++++

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