Thursday, May 11, 2017

When One Moon Loves Another Moon Comments

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Dressed in a silk sari,
Draped over a silk blouse
And a painfully tight petticoat,
Its waist string sadistically
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Jasbir Chatterjee
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Bharati Nayak 26 June 2017

Suddenly she looked up and gazed longingly at the moon! What a lovely picture she made! I forgot all about the tight waist string, the sweaty blouse and my fast dissolving makeup. And I thought so that's how it looks When one moon loves another moon... - - - - - - - -Moon is all about beauty, dream and love that are ingrained in nature.The difficulties, the sweat and discomforts were quickly forgotten by you when you looked at the young beautiful lady looking at the moon as you could relate to your own dreams.It transported you to your own dreamland.A wonderful write, thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 May 2017

A very strong moonlit love indeed. Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 11 May 2017

Brilliant portrayal of two young ladies at the Metro station battling sultry conditions. Then comes this classic touch 'one moon loves another moon...' along with its photographic proof. Thanks for sharing. Suddenly she looked up and gazed longingly at the moon! .... What a lovely picture she made! how it looks.... When one moon loves another moon...

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Sekharan Pookkat 11 May 2017

we recognise not the beautiful pictures displayed in nature in every moment- thanks for finding and sharing such a golden moment

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