Thursday, March 8, 2018

When One Is Sick And Old Comments

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Sick Old Man

by symptoms, the other world, beckons
not ominous? too naive, one reckons
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narayana aghalaya
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Valsa George 12 November 2018

Life on Earth is transitory! We should have a thought that we have to leave this world one day. Each one over sixty is on a bonus. When senility sets in, we have to accept that it is time to retire. Instead if we undertake herculean tasks, we are likely to get disappointed. A sagacious piece of advice. (10)

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Narayana Aghalaya 12 November 2018

Welcome back home, Valsa George. Thank you for your comments and appreciation. I will catch up with your poems too!

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Seamus O Brian 08 March 2018

An interesting argument, creatively presented in the format of a limerick. Nicely done, and food for thought.

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