Tuesday, June 23, 2009

When Night Arrives Comments

Rating: 5.0

When night arrives in brilliant splendor
Her heart is not akin
Discontent envelops
An emptiness within
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Lillian Jamison
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fleur de lys 04 July 2009

You truly have a flair for writing Ms Lillian and the sentiments you express in your verse are rare and lovely. To make the reader feel as you feel is indeed special.

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Beautiful delivery...Smooth & romantic....! FjR

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Deva De Silva 23 June 2009

Enjoyed the read... Deva

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Lillian Jamison

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