Sunday, November 23, 2014

When My Love States That She Is Futile... Comments

Rating: 5.0

When my love states that she is futile,
She actually mends relations with eyes of stress,
For love's never dead though covers miles,
She is ever an angel with beauty; ageless,
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Saheb Mohapatra
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 01 December 2014

Very beautiful poem and created with the feelings of pen thank you

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Salini Nair 24 November 2014

such a wonderful creation saheb....Love not sprouts leaves of futility, ...

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Valsa George 23 November 2014

' with legs of trust love shall never be lame' If there is mutual trust, love will not limp or be lame. Enjoyed your poem on love!

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Akhtar Jawad 23 November 2014

A beautiful and amazing expression of love and feelings.............10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 23 November 2014

Another great poem on feelings of love scripted with loving and wonderful lines......amazing write....10/10

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Savita Tyagi 23 November 2014

Lovely poem. For 13 yr. old you are excellent in writing. My best wishes for you. Thanks for your comment on my recent poem.

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Saheb Mohapatra

Saheb Mohapatra

Odisha, India
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