Saturday, December 6, 2014

When My Love Feels That She Is Free... Comments

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When my love feels that she is free,
She flies beyond my sky with winged creatures,
Sending tears ever hurting me,
For love's not a matter of days and then departure,
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Saheb Mohapatra
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Akhtar Jawad 07 December 2014

Rose leaves when the rose is dead, Is heaped for the beloved's bed, And so thy thought when thou art gone, Love itself shall slumber on. (P.B.C. Shelley) Nice poem and the picture is also nice..............10

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Valsa George 07 December 2014

Temporary separations and withdrawals will only make love stronger! So there is no need to lose hope! Wait for the days when tears will be replaced by smiles! A sweet poem on love!

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Salini Nair 06 December 2014

nicely portrayed the strenghth of love.....nice...

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 06 December 2014

Feelings of love so well brought out with loving and touching words really makes this piece phenomenal.......10/10........very nicely composed

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Saheb Mohapatra

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