When My Heart Opens Up And My Soul Dances. Comments
My heart opens up and my soul dances,
This doesn't happen so often,
It happens only when my body seeks rejoice,
When the first drop of rain falls on my body,
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Excellent expression. When eye meets an eye and sees the twinkle...*****
Full 5 Stars and to my Favourites. Thank you so much for sharing this fascinating poem
I won't say you are a lune-atic or lunatic, but I call this moonatic, only when it is full moon, and When My Heart Opens Up And My Soul Dances, but the full moon that does that.That is not often, only once in the 28 days, Asim Sir!
Wow I enjoyed read both versions. मेरा दिल खुल जाये और मेरी आत्मा नाच उठे...Awesome
A beautiful poem... poetic expression flows like a delightful running stream carrying philosophocal ripples.. appreciated
Lovely. And i am sure you missed...When i write a lovely poem
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7/18/2025 6:56:04 PM # 1.0.0
Wonderful expression!