Friday, September 7, 2012

When My Eyes Touch You Comments

Rating: 4.5

When my eyes first glimpsed upon you
They touched your sweet lips
A dulcet kiss of happiness.
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Theo Williams
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Unwritten Soul 03 June 2016

Just revist your poem again after 3 years and it still sounds great...a gem is always a gem no matter how long we keep, the value never get lower.. _Unwritten Soul

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Miriam Maia Padua 06 January 2013

Romantically woven.......loving from a distance...really nice thoughts

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Nurain Ali-balogun 19 September 2012

Exquisite. As usual Theo, this is amazing. You captured every moment in every line. Great work.

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