Monday, May 7, 2018

When My Darling Speaks Comments

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How merry is the song that I sing,
How jubilant are the bells that ring,
How do I convey the joy they bring
When my darling speaks his words of love?
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 05 October 2020

Say, this is getting a little tiring, sending so many of your poems to MPL! ! :)

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Bri Edwards 05 October 2020

most fine rhyming! i DID notice each stanza's last line rhymes with each other. Ok, i CAUGHT your mention of Heaven AND angels; now we have proof positive that, despite your 'naysaying', you DO believe in the great God (as opposed to the lesser God, .....found only on Zanzibar one month each winter) . And i KNOW you are praying for Trump. I won't say WHAT you pray 'for' him. ;) to MyPoemList bri :)

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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