Thursday, December 9, 2021

When Mom Comes To Die Comments

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You spend your life
Being nourished and loved.
From those special people
The ones, God sent from above.
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Lawerence Mize, Sr.
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Smoky Hoss 11 February 2022

This beautiful poem is definitely the most moving, poignant, artful work of yours I've read. I'm deeply moved my friend. Your soul shines through the brief and incredible sharing of grief that you bless us to enter into with you. Absolutely amazing. Pure poetry.

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Lawerence Mize, Sr. 13 February 2022

Thank you so much Smoky. Coming from a true poet such as yourself I consider that a compliment of the highest order. Thank you.

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Lawerence Mize, Sr. 14 December 2021

Thank you Robert.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 December 2021

lawerence i watched my mum passed last summer and it was very hard that i didn't mourn until canadian thanksgiving. yr poem has given me hope she's around. Please read my poem Blue Christmas and comment on it

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David Wood 10 December 2021

I was at my mothers bed when she died and also at my wife's hospital bed. I was told by doctors my wife had only 20 minutes, she died in 15. I held her hand repeating I love you over and over. She opened her eyes and did I love you too and died.

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kohaku 09 December 2021

iam g oing to cry right no w : )

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Lawerence Mize, Sr.

Lawerence Mize, Sr.

Baltimore, Maryland
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