Monday, March 10, 2008

When Mars Meets Venus Comments

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His heart beating harder and harder,
Every breath drawn deeper and deeper,
You can see her cheeks redder then ever,
When Mars meets Venus, thus begins this chapter.
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Sandra Wiebe 24 March 2008

this poem is sooo amazing that i even like it. good job and keep the good work.

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Blue Angel 22 March 2008

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! If romance has died, you just resussitated it. BRAVO! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Mary Gordley 15 March 2008

Very well done. Thank you.

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