Wednesday, May 12, 2010

When Many Failed, I Always Succeeded! Comments

Rating: 4.6

I look back in wonder on my life
how differently I trod and proceeded!
When most people failed, I always succeeded!
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Amrit Rathi
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Gita Ashok 15 June 2010

Your poem has provided the secret key to unlock the door of success - something that is so obvious and yet so many remain ignorant. It is a must read for all especially for teenagers and those that are ready to leave the nest and take flight on their own to explore the wild world outside. Such poems must be included in high school curricula - hope the decision makers of the education department read and appreciate these literary jewels, too! ! ! A 10 here, of course.

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C. P. Sharma 14 May 2010

Amusing practicality. I loved it. CP

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Mukul Chaudhari 13 May 2010

Yes! Agreed hands-down here. A very crisp and clear message. I like the lucidity of your style here. Nice work!

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Soraka Starchild 12 May 2010

This is very good! It was strait to the point on everything, and sounds like you accomplished a lot!

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Dallas Voyles 12 May 2010

wooooow this is soooo cool.... i like it :)

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Brandon Owens 12 May 2010

It's so easy to agree with the messages of your poems. They seem to be a part of an undeniable truth. I'm still waiting for that expression of your soul that is uniquely you though. 100% undeniably and beautifully you. Despite waiting though, this is still a great poem that I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing.

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