I look back in wonder on my life
how differently I trod and proceeded!
When most people failed, I always succeeded!
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Yes! Agreed hands-down here. A very crisp and clear message. I like the lucidity of your style here. Nice work!
This is very good! It was strait to the point on everything, and sounds like you accomplished a lot!
It's so easy to agree with the messages of your poems. They seem to be a part of an undeniable truth. I'm still waiting for that expression of your soul that is uniquely you though. 100% undeniably and beautifully you. Despite waiting though, this is still a great poem that I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing.
Your poem has provided the secret key to unlock the door of success - something that is so obvious and yet so many remain ignorant. It is a must read for all especially for teenagers and those that are ready to leave the nest and take flight on their own to explore the wild world outside. Such poems must be included in high school curricula - hope the decision makers of the education department read and appreciate these literary jewels, too! ! ! A 10 here, of course.