In the epitome of evil when Madmen collide
Our World tips off balance to the darker side
Rolling thunder over the Earth
Seeming to encompass all its girth
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One of your best Linda, that I've read of your work here. Our Earth and family of all life, have an urgent need for writers to focus on purposeful themes. Be them simple, and with indepth insight to make a convincing difference for Love and Peace. I would place your first lines at the end. It's title could be, Epitome of Evil - 'In the epitome of evil, when Madmen collide Our World tips off balance, to the darker side' Deserving of a 10+ (your way is also just fine.)
These words converse a message for all to hear, enjoyed the read, thank you. Scott
A powerful write Linda! Poignant and truly capturing thank you! ! *10*! Best regards! Friend Thad
'In the aftermath...a crimson tide.' A passionate plea! Excellent.