*********when Love Trigger Downfall Comments

A salutory tale indeed :)

Very creative write and well composed too. Nice poem. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

enjoyed such a tale of legends.

A fantastic write here Sarwar, wonderful symbolic piece crafted cleverly by your golden pen my friend....You always inspire with all that you create...excellent work 10+++

lured by the physicality, he had to turn into a nocturnal moth...lovely write...10+

A nice plot and a poem full of symbolism! a good write!

A nice plot and a poem full of symbolism! a good write!

That is then a myth with a meaning, congrats, sarwar. This is literature in true sense.10++

'Next morning, birds singing, a bit pinging, the bell ringing! ' nice words, a new style....well done :) Hataw

creative writing regards sandhya

Very creative piece, well composed, 10 Lynda xx

that's a creative piece of work rich in symbolism...

I'm going to be honest and say, that I like your other poem ' when your eyes say I love you' a lot better. but still very nice. keep writing :)

Nice romantics here. This conversational piece in poetry is really difficult to write...so wonderfully written

Good write and well planned. Good story even down to the Downfall. Your friend lLynn

Well, the plot is interesting. Well narrated.

creative composition, mythology with a allusive twist

Wow, what an imagination is at work here.

amusing...a 'myth' in modern times..smile great imagination, my friend...this is a very moving write... very alive...never a dull moment in all your writes... very unique and very original.. a combination of classical and modern approach like any ordinary rel...it has some problems...love triangle... and...freedom...or facing consequences...to be free... you write with great appeal..very impressive... worth all the smilesss.. thanks for the entertainment my friend... 10++++++ lovelots, Maia

hilarious! keep on penning :)