'When Love Strikes' Comments

But when love calls silently the heart still wants more More….yes more! Beautifully composed love poem where love begins but culminates no where.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

Beautiful work! I apologize for not reading this till now despite your respectable request long ago.....but this truly is wonderful! ! Deep emotions, vivid descriptions, like the scenes are flashing vibrantly before my eyes! But allow me to advise you despite my limited experience in the literary arts, to try to work harder on your rhymes and try to keep your lines balanced. Along with your creative words and descriptions, that would make your sentence structure stronger yet simpler to read, therefore more influencing and mind-blowing! I look forward to reading more of your work, and I would be grateful if you would read mine since i recently started submitting. Thank you :)

This poem was well written. It clearly demonstrates the many different emotions people experience when they are in love.

when love strikes who can stop it. lovely write

Nice poem, like the way its enchanting. Check out my poetry. It would be an honor.

the flow is too nature and the sense is so deep (save that moment in box.....) the momentum is there...... when the love strikes there and you.... smile/ well done, it's piece of gem

Words born from spells of love. A poet born in due season is risen in our mist.

Well penned poem with goog imagery and a nice flow.. Siya_! !

To me, your poem is a strange experience now. Usually I try to read the poet's soul over his/her lines. Let me read you again, deeper still, until i find the real gem out of it. God Bless. wait...

unquenchable desire leads to pyre SIN (I call it Satanic in Nature) well penned

This is a really beautiful and touching write. Two souls coming together in love and passion. So eloquently expressed. When love strikes it hits very hard especially when there is no prying eyes. Lovely.

lovely piece of emotions and feelings...

really nice poem enjoyed it....

@Farah llyas I really enjoyed reading ur beautiful rhyme....

lovely poem, expressed the state of emotion that a poet can only utilize

a nice poem good imagery. emotional write

nice word play and i really like the way it flows..well done

Migrating from a beat to another- so touching - good work.

A nice romantic piece sister, keep writing. Siya_! !

Wow a wonderful clipping of the most romantic movie.So nice usage of word picture! soul's touch made it pure.