Wednesday, August 2, 2006

When Love Speaks Comments

Rating: 5.0

You ask God for direction
You ask for vision clear,
Why is it that you question
The love of one so dear?
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Linda Ori
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Alison Cassidy 25 September 2008

So many of us carry baggage from childhood days and seem unable to see that which is staring us 'lovingly' in the face. This poem, though generalized in content, has a personal ring to it that makes it doubly persuasive. Excellent penning. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ramesh T A 23 September 2008

It's a beautiful, simple and lovely piece of love to know!

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Catastrophe King 03 August 2006

Linda.... This is a very nicely written poem. I love the way you have explained and the way you have maintained a rhythm... very good work! .......10/10 yes!

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