Wednesday, October 28, 2009

When Love Is Gone Comments

Rating: 4.7

When love is gone,
Beauty slowly disappears,
Feelings drowned in a sea of tears
Departure becomes a new song...
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Romeo Della Valle
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Heather Wilkins 26 May 2013

your heart lies open for the world to read here dear Romeo. Standing tall you will survive. Someday love will appear

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 04 November 2009

You surely poured and put into words your emotions because I can see a POEM here.

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Mohammed Hassan 02 November 2009

what a wonderful poem i really like your work i like the use of words and devoting your love for someone no matter the pains or whatever happened till the overwhelming win keep it up Romeo you have my rate 10+++

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I've been through this... i didn't like the feel, but i like your poem.

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Eyan Desir 29 October 2009

Well written a pleasure to read...

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Rebecca Ferguson 28 October 2009

whoa! i loved it this poem is so captivating and i love the use of words because they show tons of emotion good job :)

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Tai Chi Italy 28 October 2009

Love it! Yes we survive, and can only thank the lord for it. Great rhythm and rhyme through Smiling at you Tai

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