When Love Departs Comments
When love departs,
The soul cries!
And with it, the eyes!
Yet nobody hears,
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A perfect poem as a dedication to Sandra Feldman's 'Broken Heart' A poem full of pathos that touches the very core of your heart. Thank you Khairul Sahab for sharing it with us......5 Stars
Dear Geeta, Thank you for honouring the poem with a rating of '5 Stars' and also for the kind words attributed to it. I am highly inspired by both; the comment and the rating.
To the distant skies..........magnificent......thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.
@Anjandev Roy, Thanks for visiting my page and leaving an appreciative comment here. Much obliged.
@Suresh Kumar Ek, Deeply touched by your generous praise. Thank you.
Yes, the heart that resides in the hollow, becomes hollow, nothing else, well said dear poet.
When love is within us we feel glee but when it departs we can't express the feeling of condition with a tearful eyes.. A beautiful short and meaningful poem has been composed by you having inspired by Sandra Feldman. It is a nice dedication to her,
Lost love! ! Broken heart! ! ! Tears of the heart; Inner cry. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thank you, EKL, for elaborating on my poem with your thoughtful words. I am much inspired.
A concise and sharp edged poem cutting into heart's core. When love departs, not only the heart tears apart, but the whole world comes to a stand still! You have hit the nail on the head! Five star rating!
Thank you, dear poet @Valsa George, for appreciating the poem with a generous rating, and sharing some of your own thoughts on it. Appreciate the kind comment.
Truly lovely! I am so honored by your inspired and understanding words. To be able to feel what others feel is the deepest kind of communication between human beings, where more often than not, there is none. Thank you so much for this most precious gift! I am deeply touched by your poem, your friendship and your wonderful heart. With most affectionate sincerity, Sandra
Dear Sandra, I am overwhelmed. My heartfelt thanks for the kind words and the warm compliments and appreciation. You as a poet of love and peace have already made a mark in this poetry site. You have many friends and followers here, to whom your poems bring immense joy everyday (almost, or whenever you write) . I am just one of those many. I am short of words to reciprocate your kind words, and I cannot thank you enough. Happy writing, and for a very long time ahead. Khairul
Thank you @Sankhajit Bhattacharjee, I am glad to have your appreciative comment here. Hope you will visit again.
Love has mysterious powers It makes cry And makes laugh again It makes meditated And makes fallacious again It makes rich and impoverishes again Love It’s low spirit in enjoyment of existence And superpower in the amorphous (Dedicated to You O Poet Khairul Ahsan)
Thanks for dedicating these lines to me, @Mahtab Bangalee. I am so inspied by your comment!
Yes with love Flies life too Leaving behind A broken Dejected soul Longing to reunite In a broader realm Up above all these cries Into ocean of life Where death has no grip And life dwells no more in fear But an eternal bliss of joyous life ahead. Beautiful poetic expression though short but pictures the scene best.
'Where death has no grip And life dwells no more in fear But an eternal bliss of joyous life ahead' - so fantastic! Loved your thoughts, thanks for shaing, @Varsha M.
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When love departs, there isn't much left. A superbly crafted gem.
'When love departs, there isn't much left' - so much is said in this short sentence, and so truly! Thank you, @Evelyn Judy Buehler, for the thoughtful comment. Much inspired by the appreciation.