Wednesday, August 29, 2012

When Look At Her Face And The Moon, The Moon Is Not Beautiful. Comments

Rating: 4.3

When you stand in between him and me,
Do you look prettier than me to envy?
This cycle of tortures go on many years,
When he, you and I stand in line in cosmic sphere,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Savita Tyagi 29 August 2012

Very well composed! Anticipation kept building never knowing what was coming at the end. Loved it.

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