Saturday, September 15, 2018

When Lisa Arrives Comments

Rating: 5.0

When Lisa arrives
I just close my eyes
wanna run far away before she captures me
And she comes with fire
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Aqua Flower
COMMENTS
Carl Roussell 15 September 2018

Yet here is a strength and commitment to one's self in surviving the assault. Stay strong! !

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Kostas Lagos 15 September 2018

A fantastic poem Flower!

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Aqua Flower 15 September 2018

Thank you...she is a pain in the!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 September 2018

The way of presentation of this poem is unique. Astutely it has been delineated through Lisa. So touching and moving. Anger is the main essence of this poem. Beautiful poem shared amazingly. Full vote. Thanks.

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Aqua Flower 15 September 2018

I guess it is a little differnt than my other poems. Thank you for your comment Kumarmani and for always taking the time to read most of my poetry. :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 September 2018

Not until she hurts me! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Aqua Flower 15 September 2018

A good line to remember. Anger always hurts...you and the people around you!

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