Tuesday, September 16, 2008

When Life Was Simple Comments

Rating: 5.0

When life was simple
Was when I was in mother's womb?
but wait we were poor so my mom got no prenatal care.
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<font color =fusha>Amy 16 September 2008

i agree, life isnt simple- but thats what keeps us going on, being able to take risks and challenge yourself- great write :)

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Stacey Watts 16 September 2008

Life is never simple. You are very talented. I think this poem deserves a 10.

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 16 September 2008

People can be cruel and life even crueler. Hope things get better. Your poem is amazing.

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