Monday, May 15, 2006

When Life Is A Matter Of Timing Comments

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an angel of death once told me
that everyone dies at the wrong time.
only in the right time
can people live.
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Verbaas Mij
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very thoughtful writing, Verbaas. you have some outstanding lines here, like 'i cannot share my life and pledge my allegiance. I cannot give my soul and receive one in return.' which i think should have been the close to the poem. it makes one think more for his/herself, without the explanatory, subjective conclusion you draw. cheers.

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