very thoughtful writing, Verbaas. you have some outstanding lines here, like
'i cannot share my life
and pledge my allegiance.
I cannot give my soul
and receive one in return.'
which i think should have been the close to the poem. it makes one think more for his/herself, without the explanatory, subjective conclusion you draw.
cheers.
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very thoughtful writing, Verbaas. you have some outstanding lines here, like 'i cannot share my life and pledge my allegiance. I cannot give my soul and receive one in return.' which i think should have been the close to the poem. it makes one think more for his/herself, without the explanatory, subjective conclusion you draw. cheers.