I wanted to find some words on a card.
That would help to get thru' it when life gets so hard.
It seems you can't bear it, perhaps can't go on
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You have a wonderful ear for scansion, Rakesh and heart as open as a mighty field. The couplet style words very well for this poem and I envy your theistic conclusion. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
When going gets tough, tough gets going........ Good work...........
When going gets tough, tough gets going........ Good work...........
A very well written and meaningful poem. You are very blessed and hope you find the eternal peace.
Just faith on allah.......... RAkesh............life will nva be so hard......... and one thing more.......... be strong......................u r ryt.... jus pray......... but being a male.......... pray will nva do gud.......... if will fold ur hands.......... and complacent......... Be bravo..........
fascinating! I like the rhyme and the title is great. I like this 2 lines 'what are the words you so need...' keep it up