Friday, December 26, 2008

When Life Gets So Hard Comments

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I wanted to find some words on a card.
That would help to get thru' it when life gets so hard.

It seems you can't bear it, perhaps can't go on
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rakesh rampariya
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Merna Ibrahim 06 January 2009

fascinating! I like the rhyme and the title is great. I like this 2 lines 'what are the words you so need...' keep it up

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Alison Cassidy 06 January 2009

You have a wonderful ear for scansion, Rakesh and heart as open as a mighty field. The couplet style words very well for this poem and I envy your theistic conclusion. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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*Trusting You* 29 December 2008

when I kicked down I kick back! good job. Becca

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 26 December 2008

When going gets tough, tough gets going........ Good work...........

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 26 December 2008

When going gets tough, tough gets going........ Good work...........

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Jay P. Narain 26 December 2008

A very well written and meaningful poem. You are very blessed and hope you find the eternal peace.

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Mahfooz Ali 26 December 2008

Just faith on allah.......... RAkesh............life will nva be so hard......... and one thing more.......... be strong......................u r ryt.... jus pray......... but being a male.......... pray will nva do gud.......... if will fold ur hands.......... and complacent......... Be bravo..........

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