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When.. Life Changes Comments

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When life was new........When endings start,
when dreams were real...When love departs
When eyes see love........When closed are blind,
when twilight comes….... When stars align.
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Kayode Are 27 November 2017

Love- just a word- with many connotations- a meaning not as well shared as we assume. Fragments in the flow of the poem dramatized the uneven elements in what is called love.

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Lodigiana Poetess 27 November 2017

Thank you so much Kayode for your insightful observation..very much appreciated! xx

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