When.. Life Changes Poem by Lodigiana Poetess

When.. Life Changes



When life was new........When endings start,
when dreams were real...When love departs
When eyes see love........When closed are blind,
when twilight comes….... When stars align.
When hope was fresh…... When youth was gone,
when singing starts…..... When ends the song.
When time's eternal …....When time drags by,
when eyes all smile........When eyes just cry.
When love was peace......When love was wars,
when you were mine….....When I was yours.
When at the start...........When at the end,
when love was real.........When love pretends.
When all seemed bliss..... When all was grey,
when all you did ……........Was walk away......

When.. Life Changes
Monday, October 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: change,loss,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
when...all we want is love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kayode Are 27 November 2017

Love- just a word- with many connotations- a meaning not as well shared as we assume. Fragments in the flow of the poem dramatized the uneven elements in what is called love.

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Lodigiana Poetess 27 November 2017

Thank you so much Kayode for your insightful observation..very much appreciated! xx

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