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A painful reality which the whole nation is facing.

Very powerful expression. The second stanza could have been made more lucid.9

Ammmmmazing composition indeed! ......10+

the pain is compelling...and we are all in it, in the unreal hollowness that smirks from the debris, from the charred bodies, from the almost wiped out remains of innocent humanity...we are all in it with you, warda...

yeah wardha......true very nice

i like this poem not for the mood that it sets but the style it is written with some satire, , well written wardha, , , ,

a very beautiful write indeed...thanks 10+

beautiful write, wardha jawdat...very strong and poetic voice against terrorism that kills...expressions excelling your emotions...10+

because the brickwork Was more valuable? or worse Because the white of skin we are one unfractured seamless-

The world weep for Pakistan...condolence to the nation...a 10+++.