Tuesday, March 19, 2013

When It Just Won'T Comments

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Different never happens, when it just won't.
Different outcomes never happen, when it just won't
Without resistance, endurance, and persistence competition idly stands by.
Competition is a fighting adversary of ones fear.
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Timothy Branch
fear Voices
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Roseann Shawiak 19 March 2013

Okay poem. Try combining some of the sentences into one, and use when it just won't a little less or reword it a bit. It has a good point.

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Timothy Branch

Timothy Branch

Petersburg, Virginia
Timothy Branch
Timothy Branch
Petersburg, Virginia
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