When It Hurts Poem by Rare Gem

When It Hurts

Rating: 3.5

Have you felt the kind of hurt
That comes with weakness,
And leaves you shattered unable to stand?
A pain so piercing making it difficult to breath.

Have you ever felt the kind of hurt
That slashes like a fractured mirror,
Deep within your soul?
And you're afraid to pull out the blade,
Terrified of agony's relentless grip.

Sometimes everything goes blank,
Relieving you of every thoughts
Emotions fill the bottles of your heart,
One after another, unto the next.

Have you ever felt the kind of hurt,
That brings you torrential grief?
Overflowing and never ending.
Swept away by a tidal wave of feelings,
A sea of anguish.

Have you ever felt the kind of pain,
That makes your soul bleed?
Embers of shattered dreams that rages inside.
No solace found in tears or tranquil depths.

A pain that a mere eyes can't reveal,
And a smile hides like a mask.
A feeling so surreal,
Silence, a word that screams,
So loud but inexplicable.

Friday, October 11, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A powerful and emotional poem portraying the pain people feel at difficult times and level
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 13 October 2024

A poignant verse written with insight. Very heartfelt with strong emotions..

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Pain is real " Embers of shattered dreams that rage inside. ".. powerful poem

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