Tuesday, September 13, 2005

When It Comes Comments

Rating: 4.0

When it comes
It just comes
Like the lightning
It precedes the thunder
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moonshadow in darkness 08 December 2006

i liked this one too. *smiles* another 10.

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Chosen Reject 06 June 2006

atomic bomb of emotions...hmmm dat sounds cool. Felt sorry for Loralai Gilmore for draggin her into this poem LOL

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Kristin C. 06 June 2006

This is a gooood one. I thought It was about an atomic bomb at first, but perhaps its like an atomic bomb of emotions, i dunno, I loourve it.

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