When It Comes To Poetry Comments
When it comes to poetry
I feel like David
Before he went out to meet Goliath
Saul offered him his armour
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A witty and insightful analogy. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing, Raymond.
Rotten, lying, infamous politician should read this poem and learn how to behave in life. But! Unfortunately, poets don't run things, crooks do! Wonderful, universal poem, that All should read and learn something good, for a change in the lost society of today.
Humble words of a noble heart. I love these figures - allusion and simile inter alia - in play. An accomplished literary effort, dear poet.
Lovely write! The kind of poetry that hits the reader hard. Join me on wordpress if you could. It would be an honor to have such an audience! Greetings from Athens, Greece?
You write in such a way that you make a connection with the reader straight away, beautifully written!
But I am just A simple man Trying to propel his point By straight forward means Along a straight course Hoping to find the mark. Excellent poem. Beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing.
Well deserving of the honor. Congratulations Raymond. A very nice poem
I first saw this poem a month after joining this site. I was impressed then and am now glad to see it featured.
Kelly you have really gone out of your way to encourage me, and plenty of others on PH, and I and I am sure others as well really appreciate what you have and are doing.
Smart poet can easily find the sensitive spot at the target end to shoot at using the poetic pebbles of his choice using the poem sling, making the target feel it. wonderful write. Congratulations for your positioning. x
...By straight forward means Along a straight course Hoping to find the mark.............. Such is the passion of a poet to penetrate the reader's heart. Illustrated well.
A great poem reiterating the might of straight forwardness and simplicity. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
You are more than a Sheppard when it comes to poetry. This poem is written beautifully. Congratulations for being chosen
No grand words; living with the mude of life. Nice piece of work.
Thank you Edward, you comment now and on other occasions is appreciated.
The humility with which you have defined a truthful yet simple poem is remarkable. Congrats. But any giant can be slain / If the stone finds its mark / But I am just / A simple man
Rajnish, I appreciate all the times you have taken now and in the past to read and comment. God bless you.
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Nice character witness!