When Independence Becomes A Crime Comments

When independence becomes a crime When you're beaten at your own crime When independence becomes a crime When I purchase it without a dime! Clearly it's a social problem and I was hoping at the end poet would implore us to take actions to save lost independence.

An insightful creation nicely embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, Hafsah.

This poem explains a lot of things in such great lines but I waited for a retailiation that does not come. Well written poem though. Please read my poem " Poems grow like plants " and comment. Thank you.