Thursday, February 5, 2009

When, In Deep Despair Comments

Rating: 5.0

When in deep despair, melancholy takes my hand
Carresses my cheek gently and for the life of me
The words don't come and I cannot speak
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Rani Turton
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Mamta Agarwal 05 February 2009

full of wisdom and maturity. nothing lasts, cycle of life goes on, when in deep despair, melancholy takes my hand- i can identify with this. truly beautiful poem. shows strength of character and forbearance...10- Mamta

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Kris Smith 05 February 2009

Rani the power of your pen is overwhelming, how can anyone refuse to hold that hand, again your poetry holds the eyes and the heart 10 +++ Chris

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Joseph Poewhit 05 February 2009

That last line is full of emotion.

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